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I wrote this tomorrow by ~Rosesblood:iconRosesblood:



I wrote this tomorrow, although then it was yesterday. That can't be right, but I know it is. Tomorrow I died.

I'm not sure where to begin; I suppose starting at the end makes as much sense as any.

Tomorrow my empty body went over the falls, tomorrow. He strangled me tomorrow, and then left my body to be destroyed, taking away the proof of the crime. A sudden rage had overcome him, it made no sense. He fell over; he didn't seem to know who I was.

We walked along the riverbed, carefree and loving tomorrow. We held hands and kissed, looking towards the woods. We walked slowly.

My thoughts are not my own today. They tell me it is shock. But I died tomorrow. They tell me no, that it wasn't me who died yesterday.

It wasn't yesterday, yesterday I lived. I am dead tomorrow. I am dead. I have been dead.
©2005-2009 ~Rosesblood
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:iconx-leiner-x:
woah, its haunting and alot different than most everything you can read here, i like this alot

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"I am only one, but still I am one. I cannot do everything, but still I can do something"
:iconrosesblood:
thanx. i wasn't too sure of it.
:iconx-leiner-x:
how can you not be sure of it?! its awesome! its tooo good ^.^

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"I am only one, but still I am one. I cannot do everything, but still I can do something"
:iconrosesblood:
lol thanx for the boost of confidence. and. i generally dont like anything that i write.
:iconx-leiner-x:
>.< i dont tend to like what i write while im writing it and im always thinking 'grr, this is gonna be total crap' but once i read it over i think its alright ^.^

and even if you dont like your writing, its ok, cause i like it enough for the both of us

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"I am only one, but still I am one. I cannot do everything, but still I can do something"

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